~Down~

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    dedicated to: Johnathan Matthew Aird

    ~Down~

    Down in this world so full of hate
    I wish that they would just give us a chance
    No one saying its alright to cry so I dont
    Wishing i were in your arms, I let a tear fall

    Down in this love that has little faith
    Where me and you are stressed so much
    No one knows how much longer it will last
    Wishing we could make up, i let it all go

    Down in your bed, wrapped in your love
    Where all we worry about is how close we get
    Niether stumbles as your hands slide up my body
    Wishing it wouldn't end, I pull you close and dont let go

    Down in your arms pulling you closer
    Loving you is all I want to do sweety
    Nothing can make us quit what we do for the other
    So come here, let me lock my heart in your hands

    Down in this love where we love together
    With loving hearts and gentle kisses alone
    Now we keep silent so we can be together
    Down baby, I am so down for this life.

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