Finally Decided

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  • Run Aways

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    This is mostly about Her killing her self, deciding to end her life, then she turns and runs away from all that has hurt her.

    Finally Decided

     I have finally decided nothing matters
    Finally decided no one cares for the heart
    I have finally declared the war in my head
    Officially decided  to cock this gun and point

    I have officially decided to end this life
    Finally realized her life is pointless now
    I have finally declared the immportance of lies
    Officially decided to lock into the target and shoot

    I have decided that this is my last
    My last day to live, last dream to dream at all
    I have declared a false hope wishing to fly
    Hoping someone could show me that they cared

    I have decided I'm not worth this place
    How my thoughts could tear up the soul, this is me
    I have declared this my last mistake, it's on me
    No one sees no one knows no one cares if I fall

    So I will down this whiskey and get my blades
    So i shall down this vodka and load this gun
    So now you hear my ragged breath upon you
    I am no longer here, I've vanished.
                             Who notices?

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    rougepriest commented on Finally Decided

    10-01-2009

    well a cry for help alcohol and fire arms are a terrible mix to say the least, so many young people today write this way too its a very disturbing pattern even if in the fantasy of the internet I will say its a decent poem as poems go the message however heart felt is twisted. If you dont take a stand for something you will fall for anything so think about that one line ok
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    EmoAlexis

    10/01/2009

    I dont get what you mean about that line, it is meant as in, shes drinking her probs away, and that doesn't work so she gets a gun so she can shoot herself. Thats what that line portrays

    The true philosopher and the true poet are one, and a beauty, which is truth, and a truth, which is beauty, is the aim of both.

    Ralph Waldo Emerson, American Poet (1803-1882)

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