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idk, just old poets kinda creep me out

Random- a little mean =)

I think older poets are kind of creepy
The fact that they are all wrinkly
I know they are amzingly talented
But if your on a site, keep it to kids

Whitman and the Fireside poets excluded
They are the real deal and they never age
But if you have wrinkles and a beard
Maybe you should stay within your timeline

Cauze all us kids know are computers and cells
But you have the wisedom of writing it all down
And so when you cheat and write on the web
You're not embracing your old ways of head

So this is my thought about older poets
And this is my attempted free for all
As you can see niether worked that well
For its short and i don't think it can be so

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When power leads man towards arrogance, poetry reminds him of his limitations. When power narrows the area of man's concern, poetry reminds him of the richness and diversity of existence. When power corrupts, poetry cleanses.

John F. Kennedy (1917-1963) Thirty-fifth President of the USA

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