Fall For You

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    i was listening to FALL FOR YOU by SECONDHAND SERENADE- THEY OWN THIS SONG!

    Fall For You

    Why are you torturing me?

    I try to please you, but you just throw me away.

    I keep falling for you, but what is it for?

    There ain’t another who shall brighten my day.


    Why do you keep changing your mind?

    I thought you liked our hands entwined…?

    I keep trying to make a spark

    But every time its there, my world goes dark.


    Why will my reason for loving you stay secret forever?

    You hurt me, you protect me, people try to warn me about you

    They say you’re no good, that you’ll drag me to your lair

    But what they don’t know, is that I can never be mad at you, for with my heart you have an affair.


    I try to forget you let your steps fade away with the sand

    But every time I leave you, I turn around and you’re there.

    My knight in shining armor, never letting me fall apart.

    Even when you break it, you’re always the one to mend my heart

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    mattman90 commented on Fall For You

    10-01-2009

    I like it! I think that it would do with some clearly defined stanzas. Maybe flow a little better, but I really like it especially the two last lines.

    EmoAlexis

    10/02/2009

    yeah...when I put it on from my comp to here, it looked ok, very largs, but defined stanzas. but them i looked at it, and it is what you see which I don't like, I agree. But its in the middle of a comp or whatever, so I left it. As soon as it is out of whatever it is in, I am going to change it. which is anytime I guess... haha. So yeah, thank you for your comment. The last two lines, are actuallu about my ex to whom I still like haha. thanks again

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