Drowning

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    Drowning

    I woke up with my toes covered in water.
    It's strange but not alarming.
    A little annoyed, I get ready for the day.
    It is just a little water.
    I can handle this.

    I opened the front door; the flood rushed in.
    Waist deep in the icy water, I shiver.
    I had no idea it was there.
    Nothing to worry about, it's just a little water.
    I can handle this.

    I passed through my front gate.
    The ground slopes; my head is barely above the water.
    I start to worry. This can't be good.
    Drawing on my own strength I keep moving.
    I can handle this.

    I continue on tiptoes, but the ground disappears.
    I struggle, but I'm sinking fast.
    Frightened, I'm fighting, but losing.
    My hope is starting to fade.
    I can handle this.

    I can't see the surface.
    I am weak from the struggle.
    I am not sure if I can fight anymore.
    Not living, not dying, slowly drowning from my troubles.
    I can't handle this.

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    hoth2o commented on Drowning

    07-26-2009

    Physical or psychological? very descriptive and can take you to either place..

    mmichelle97219

    07/26/2009

    I am glad you liked it. Thanks so much Michelle

    Phoenix9 commented on Drowning

    02-17-2009

    gave it a 10, excellant write

    riceryder commented on Drowning

    02-17-2009

    wow great job felt like i was there with you

    Poetry is what is lost in translation.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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