Surrounded

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  • Sadness

    Surrounded

    surrounded by people
    faces that do not connect to me

    surrounded by chatter
    but no one is talking with me

    srrounded by movement
    all I want is to stand still

    surrounded by my own terror
    trapped, imprisoned, alone

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    GentleT commented on Surrounded

    07-24-2009

    I sense a person in a deep depression and the saddness in their heart in the line surrounded by my won terror.

    hoth2o commented on Surrounded

    07-18-2009

    To be in a croud and all alone, no connection.. Interesting write!

    If I feel physically as if the top of my head were taken off, I know that is poetry.

    Emily Dickinson (1830-1886) American poet.

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