First Passionate Kiss

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    Inspired by am2anangel when she challenged someone to write about their first passionate kiss. Hope it meets everyones approval. I love a challenge any takers?

    First Passionate Kiss

    By,

    Clarence Marsh 09-01-09

    My first passionate kiss was a moment sealed with bliss

    It was a Friday night dance at our Junior High

     We both were very shy

    The DJ played a slow song called “How bout us”

    As we danced swaying to the music

     My hands firmly around her waist

    I gazed into her big brown eyes and without any haste

    I kissed her sweet lips for the very first time

    Time stood still as we kissed…

    Nothing else mattered

     For I just had just received

    My first passionate kiss

    As we opened our eyes and caught our breathe

    The DJ played the last song of the night

    It was “signed sealed delivered I’m yours”

    As we smiled at each other not a mere word was uttered

    We kissed again and said I’m yours

    That was the night that my first passionate kiss

    Was signed sealed and delivered

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    teasasue commented on First Passionate Kiss

    09-04-2009

    lol that is soo cool, I could actually picture the dance in my mind with all that going on, great job

    CMarsh

    09/04/2009

    Thanks Teasasue! I tried to remember all the details and it just flowed.

    photochick commented on First Passionate Kiss

    09-04-2009

    Great job nice detail grand imagery very beautiful poem well crafted and flows perfectly in tune with line after line I look forward to reading more of your work ... you did a great job with am2's challenge you should try and join UPA with all of us if you like a challenge you will do great there look us up in the forms and see some of the challenges we do great write keep it up

    photochick

    09/04/2009

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    09/04/2009

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    lucky62 commented on First Passionate Kiss

    09-03-2009

    Sir you take me back to my divine moment in time thanks for the time trip............

    CMarsh

    09/04/2009

    Lucky62! Glad I could help you on the trip down memory lane...your comments always welcome.

    Singcanary commented on First Passionate Kiss

    09-03-2009

    great job...felt like i was the one dancing with you. LOL flowed nicely and very visual.

    CMarsh

    09/03/2009

    Thanks Singcanary! I can remember it like it just happened and it was many many years ago. Maybe oneday I can take you up on that dance...lol

    1990lh commented on First Passionate Kiss

    09-03-2009

    awwwwww wow that was really beautiful i love i i picture the whole sene in my head u really did a great job :0)

    CMarsh

    09/03/2009

    Thanks 90 Your comments mean alot to me. It was a challenge that am2anangel put out tuesday night and I said ok. Glad it turned out ok.

    Poetry comes nearer to vital truth than history.

    Plato (BC 427-BC 347) Greek philosopher.

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