Friday Night With the Girls

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    Friday Night With the Girls

    The work week is finished,
    No more bosses, no more school.
    It's time to let the hair down and act like a fool.

    We meet at the Petrol,
    with kids in tow,
    Wanting to relax,
    and enjoy the show.

    Everyone's married,
    Except for me,
    Waiting for spouses,
    And that, I envy.

    Some seem happy,
    Some not so much,
    How you can not want,
    Someone to touch?

    They talk of their toys,
    And I'm in the dark,
    Never had I a desire,
    To go on such a lark.

    I don't understand,
    Use of the artificial,
    When the alternative
    Is so beneficial.

    The kids are off playing,
    Clueless as can be,
    I wonder if they are,
    Just between you and me.

    Life is funny,
    In certain respects,
    I wonder if toys,
    Have the same effect?

    I can't imagine,
    What drove them to that,
    Is there nothing inside,
    To change that fact?

    The saddest part of all,
    I'm sorry to say,
    I'm the oldest of all,
    And still want to play.







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    laydbak1 commented on Friday Night With the Girls

    07-29-2009

    No sane person questions the glorious, unique feeling natural fulfillments are... They are a solid, non-debatable, first choice in the sensual delights... But, to say other options cannot provide an occasional enhancement equal to, or even better under certain circumstances than those of the natural pleasures, well... I'm not so sure... Experience is the best teacher... Exploration is the best pupil... A good write...

    castlemist commented on Friday Night With the Girls

    05-29-2009

    I like this...the light, bouncyness makes me happy and younger folks may think the ending is sad..I'm your age and I don't...I can relate. Jerry

    monkyntz commented on Friday Night With the Girls

    05-18-2009

    another job well done very clever and funny as hell i smiled through the whole read another 10 for sure

    lightcourier commented on Friday Night With the Girls

    05-01-2009

    This poem, like all of yours I've read is fun to read and flows right on through ending with a twist of a question or thought. Very enjoyable! Just play! Thanks!

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