Get a job

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    Sometimes people need a little push.

    Get a job
    SO YOU SAY YOU ARE A MAN.
    THEN GO AHEAD GROW-UP AND TAKE A STAND.
    OR DO I HAVE TO HOLD YOUR HAND.
    RELEASE THE FEAR, AND GET YOUR ASS IN GEAR.
    DO YOU REALIZE YOU’VE BEEN OUT OF WORK FOR 
    ALMOST A YEAR?
    THE BILLS HAVE BEGUN TO STACK:
    THIS HAS GOT US WAY OFF TRACK.
    OPEN YOUR EYES AND SEE, IF YOU KEEP THIS UP 
    WE’LL BE FORCED TO PACK.
    I DON’T UNDERSTAND, YOU’RE STRONG AND HEALTHY.
    DON’T YOU WANT THE MONEY?
    STOP BLAMING THE GAME,  AND LIVING IN SHAME.
    YOU WILL SEE THE CHANGE, IT WON’T BE THE SAME.
    YOU’LL LIVE A BETTER LIFE, YOU’LL HAVE A HAPPIER WIFE.
    STOP LAYING AROUND AND BEING A JERK. 
    GET UP AND LOOK FOR WORK!

    SO YOU SAY YOU ARE A MAN.
    THEN GO AHEAD GROW-UP AND TAKE A STAND.
    OR DO I HAVE TO HOLD YOUR HAND.

    RELEASE THE FEAR, AND GET YOUR ASS IN GEAR.
    DO YOU REALIZE YOU’VE BEEN OUT OF WORK FOR 
    ALMOST A YEAR?

    THE BILLS HAVE BEGUN TO STACK:
    THIS HAS GOT US WAY OFF TRACK.
    OPEN YOUR EYES AND SEE, IF YOU KEEP THIS UP 
    WE’LL BE FORCED TO PACK.

    I DON’T UNDERSTAND, YOU’RE STRONG AND HEALTHY.
    DON’T YOU WANT THE MONEY?

    STOP BLAMING THE GAME,  AND LIVING IN SHAME.
    YOU WILL SEE THE CHANGE, IT WON’T BE THE SAME.

    YOU’LL LIVE A BETTER LIFE, YOU’LL HAVE A HAPPIER WIFE.

    STOP LAYING AROUND AND BEING A JERK. 
    GET UP AND LOOK FOR WORK!

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    gregster commented on Get a job

    05-17-2010

    lol..........this is very funnt actually .......i would never let my wife tell me that .now i know i will get my paper up.......thanks for the inspiration
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    HarverTomsson commented on Get a job

    11-16-2009

    There may not always be a paycheck, but there is always work to do. And hard working guys survive, until their job eats them up.
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    sandyb

    12/07/2009

    Thanks for reading my poems. I do understand, but unfortunately he just didn't really care at the time. He was not even trying and this went on for over a year.

    lithiumblack commented on Get a job

    08-30-2009

    Quirky and not at all subtle, and not only a push, but a push off of a cliff! Some people never learn...there are jobs out there, you just need to be resourceful and clever. 10.
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    CMarsh commented on Get a job

    08-30-2009

    So true I could borrow this one and send it to my ex,its why we are no more.
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    In science one tries to tell people, in such a way as to be understood by everyone, something that no one ever knew before. But in poetry, it's the exact opposite.

    Franz Kafka (1883-1924) Czech writer.

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