Dark Pit

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Dark Pit

I have reached the Dark Pit within.

I am full of regret, 

should of let go of everything I held in.

 

I did not realize how low I could get.

These emotions, 

I wish I never met.

 

I'm hurting those around me,

and for that I am sorry.

I do not deserve the love you give.

I am not worthy.

 

I try to hide these tears I cry;

when you ask I tell a lie.

In my frustration lives an agonizing 

desperation,

alone I can not rectify.

You pry as to why I deny,

what my eyes cannot falsify.

 

Confused and depressed

I have led others to be stressed.

Had I been able to address

my worries and concerns

instead of having them suppressed.

None of these fears would have had

a chance to manifest.

 

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Lolee commented on Dark Pit

09-20-2009

Written very nicely...for a very sad subject. I think life is the hardest no mom. Good poem...the reader knows what your problem is and what you think about it. Knowing is half the battle.

Lolee

09/20/2009

pardon my misnomer. I meant "the hardest ON mom." lol

deathgoth01 commented on Dark Pit

09-01-2009

You can ryme and make sence at the same time! GREAT! I wish i could do it!

SILKYTWEED commented on Dark Pit

06-24-2009

Nice Flow....again, in this beautifully written piece...I can definitely relate to that most hated and feared dark pit....

To have great poets there must be great audiences too.

Walt Whitman, American Poet (1819-1892)

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