HAIKU 1 AND HAIKU 2

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    THESE ARE MY FIRST EXPERIMENTS WITH THE HAIKU FORM. I FIND IT A VERY INTERESTING EXPERIMENT TO DO MORE WITH LESS!!

    HAIKU 1 AND HAIKU 2

                             HAIKU 1       


                   TIRELESS TICK-TOCKING
                   UNCONCERNED WITH TIME'S PASSING
                   SUNRISE, SUNSET, MOON



                            HAIKU 2

                   IN A HOLLOWED TREE
                   A JUST SO WOVEN BASKET
                   BEAKS, EYES, SHRILL SQUEAKS

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    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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