SONG

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    SONG

             YOUR LIPS ON MINE
              LINGUA FRANCA OF
              LUST AND LONGING
             
              MY LIPS ON YOURS
              OUR SILENT FLUENCY
              OF LOVES LOST
             
              AND FOUND
             
              AND LOST AGAIN

              DA CAPO?
              AD INFINITUM?
             

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    devaamido commented on SONG

    06-25-2009

    Very sensuous!! Economy of syntax, Descriptive of the most seductive form of sensuality...that which always remains tantalizingly out of reach. Excellent work
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    dahlusion commented on SONG

    06-11-2009

    I like the poetic simplicity of this one: sexy, erotic, and with a steamy atmosphere giving it a perfect arousing touch of heat.
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    A poem begins as a lump in the throat, a sense of wrong, a homesickness, a lovesickness. It finds the thought and the thought finds the words.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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