hhhmmmmmm...

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  • fawndesno10
  • omgosh...been so long since i been on here....i miss this..

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im really mad i hate being accused of things i DID NOT do...felt i should write about it.

hhhmmmmmm...

it hurts when your blamed for something you did not do
no matter how many times i swear i didn do it
you keep sayin whatever and you dont care
but i care and its not whatever
how are we supposed to get better
when alls we do is accuse and assume

we will never get better that way
but i hav my reasons to assume and accuse
you dont have any reason to do either one
because im the one always staying home
im always alone

you dont know how i feel
you never will
alls you can do is help me
after all i do deserve it

and now people are keeping tabs on me
allright i will show you what
assumeing and accusing will get you

you freak on me because something i didn even do
i wish there was a way i could prove to you
i wouldnt lose my trust wit you over
something so small

thats what love is
no matter what
itll never fade....

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dblair1229 commented on hhhmmmmmm...

07-14-2009

This is sooo true......I know a couple of people who need to read this!

NitaBoo commented on hhhmmmmmm...

07-07-2009

I like this poem...it had great flow until the end but nonetheless good job and a true motion...

Poetry is what is lost in translation.

Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

fawndesno10’s Poems (12)

Title Comments
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DoNe..... 4
hhhmmmmmm... 2
dreams... 1
not me for you; but your for me 3
Who will take me to the most perfect place in the world..... 4
my lil sis 8
getting myself to trust you.... 3
why not us???? 2
LyFe AnD tHe MeSsEd Up TrIcKs It PlAyS oN yOu 1
WHY 3
i miss you dad.. 3
so precious my son.... 5