DoNe.....

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  • fawndesno10
  • omgosh...been so long since i been on here....i miss this..

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im mad may not seem like a poem but its my feelings....

DoNe.....

im tired of asking why
wondering why
thinking why
your never going to change
yeah you say you will
but when
when will you change
its obvious to me now
no matter how much i ask  wonder or think why
your never going to change
and i will tell you why
because your a guy
that is confused on what he wants
girlfriend or no girlfriend
me or her
young or jus right
fat or skinny
white or black
hispanic or asian
what do you want
of course you say me
because its what you think i want to here
but its not
i dont want to here lies
how bout the truth
for once in your life
could you not tell a lie
could you sit by my side
and tell me something that i cant prove a lie
i know how you play your game
sorry to say
your game will no longer work on me
nor will it work on any girl i meet
they will hate you as much as i should
they will move on and leave you behind
or will they play you and leave you cryin
tell you to your face
that your a disgrace to them
to there future
to there reputation
they dont want to be known as the girl who got played
more as they want to be known as the girl
who beat you at your own game
unlike me took me long
because i could not see
that you were playing me like a video game
status set on easy
you thought playin me was going to be easy
till u got caught up
u say im sorry'
shut up
no u aint
uve lost your game
now throw it away
because there is no way
not today
or neday
go away...


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tierra7 commented on DoNe.....

12-13-2009

Excellent ! i felt the emotion in this ...i kno' the feelin' all too well...thanx for sharin'..Love n Light, Terra @}-'-,- (10+ )

Chaos128 commented on DoNe.....

10-08-2009

Sometime you gotta vent, Fawn, and iIsee you don't believe in doing it halfway ha ha. Look at the bright side, you got a hardcore, take no prisoners poem out of it... thats called taking lemons and making strong lemonade.

1990lh commented on DoNe.....

07-19-2009

i lreally this it was a poem full of emotion mostly anger great write keep it up

AshRenee commented on DoNe.....

07-14-2009

I like this one a lot. It has a raw anger that is brought out by the betrayal of lies. I like that you say that it's not what you want to hear. Not many people can stop themselves from believing it, even if they know it's a lie. It's a game that's been played from the beginning, and it's time for it to stop, and I'm glad that you've beaten him, so the next time he plays, he won't be so arrogant.

Poetry is not the expression of personality but an escape from personality.

T. S. Eliot (1888-1965) American-English poet and playwright.

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