my lil sis

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    i couldnt help but write a poem about my sister...we went through alot together

    my lil sis

     i knoe we have had our ups and downs
    but no matter what we will always be one
    wherever i go you will be there
    wherever you go i will be there
    i know right now
    we're millions of miles apart
    no matter how many miles you are away
    you will always have your place in my heart
    you are my lil sister and i would do anything for you
    i know that we have hurt eachother in the past
    i know that i broke your heart
    when i left in a flash
    but i couldnt handle it anymore
    all the bruses and cuts
    i couldnt stay
    i wouldve went nuts
    i used to watch while she beat you
    and you while she beat me
    until one day
    we knew that we couldnt do this anymore
    so right as she walked in the door
    we beat her like she beat us for 6 years
    we left her black and blue
    like she did to me and you
    i want you to knoe
    that even tho i may not show
    you will always be my favorite
    because your my little sister
    and we went through alot together
    and for 4 years i have been missing you
    i cant believe weve went this long
    i really miss you
    someday we will reunite
    until then keep doing right

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    NitaBoo commented on my lil sis

    07-24-2009

    Wow...very emotional and heartfelt...a good write....
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    AshRenee commented on my lil sis

    07-14-2009

    Aww, this is so sad. I completely understand the need to leave, and I'm sure she only wished you'd taken her with you. And while I'm not sure of your relationship, surely she's forgiven you, and doesn't hold it against you. And I'm sure the beating of "her" has helped mend. Something that I'm sure brought you closer because it was something achieved by the both of you. A good write
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    UnrefinedYet commented on my lil sis

    06-27-2009

    wow im glad you had someone by your side during those hard times. this poem is very touching..
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    christianprep commented on my lil sis

    06-27-2009

    hey i like it its sad yes, me and my twin as been through a lot with being split from our younger siblings and shes been abused when she was about seven by her step mother so she knows what u feel there girl......i understand the pain in being away from them in one point in my life i just had a melt down but latter we were reunited with are loved siblings so yes if you pray those mericles can happen it happened for us and now look at us we may not be close to each other but were glad we get to see each other so hang in there girl keep praying very good poetry love it
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    MsKrystle commented on my lil sis

    06-27-2009

    Awww this is a very nice poem for your sister....its sad you two had to endure so much pain...thanx for sharing
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