i miss you dad..

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    • fawndesno10
    • omgosh...been so long since i been on here....i miss this..

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    I havent seen my dad since i was ten.....and my dad has always been my world. but now i jus sit and wait until the day he will change for me.

    i miss you dad..

    its been 7 years now
    i miss you dad
    i know that you miss me too
    why does it have to be this way now
    when i was growing up you came and went
    at least i got to see you once in a while
    now i just see you in old faded pictures
    youd think since youve been gone so long
    i would care lass about you
    but i dont
    i think about you everyday
    i wish on shooting stars
    i wished at all of my bithdays since ive been 10
    im going to be seventeen soon
    and still i wish i could see you
    some people say your pathetic
    to me your busy
    to busy for me
    youd rather have your girls and your drugs
    why dont you want your daughter
    why did you leave me to face this world on my own
    i feel that no matter how hard i try
    i wont get anywhere
    just like you dad
    a nobody that couldve been somebody and couldve went somewhere
    insted you choose people who are only making you worse
    i just want my daddy back
    and you know what scares me
    i dont think i will ever be able to see you again
    because if god hasnt already taken you
    it wont be long until the drugs do
    you told me you would change
    and tat we would be a family again soon
    what happened to that
    i miss you dad
    why cant it just be me and you

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    dblair1229 commented on i miss you dad..

    07-14-2009

    I read this and thought about my dad...I did not know him until I was 30. You were blessed!
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    tierra7 commented on i miss you dad..

    07-06-2009

    WOW! heart tuggin' .sooooo sad, But.... beautifully written..i feel the emotions deep thru...thank you for sharin' your heart.....
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    Chaos128 commented on i miss you dad..

    06-30-2009

    This is a very affecting poem, Fawn. I wouldn't be pretentious and say I know how you feel, but I can say I feel the emotion in your poem. It touches the heart, and thats the whole point; at least to me.
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    A poem begins as a lump in the throat, a sense of wrong, a homesickness, a lovesickness. It finds the thought and the thought finds the words.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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