• fawndesno10
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found out that there is no such thing as a good man....NO SUCH THING....so some advisew from Ms.T dont have boyfriends.

WHY

i remember when you used to be faithful to me
you always told me
how beautiful i was and how lucky you were to be with me
you told me you couldnt describe how much you loved me
really you didnt want to tell me
how much you were falling out of love with me
and more in love with her
what is it that she has that i dont
what is it that you want
your confused on what you want in life
first its me and our son
then its her and our son
why cant it just be me again
why do you need her
i now realize now how much you have hurt me
why am i with you when alls you do is feed me lies
our whole entire reltaionship was a lie
yeah i know we both cheated
but i changed
like you said you did
wait you did change
for the worse
you changed back into your old cheating playing ways
you cant keep a healthy relatonship if your life depended on it
its like your never going to grow up and realize that als you need
is family
by then itll be way to late
you will have your little family
but only one thing missing
his real mom
how are you ging to explain that yo kept cheating on his mom
so you didnt work out
how are you going to tell him that his mother changed and YOU didnt
his mother is the one that made the effort to be with you
and you returned the favor by cheating and playing his mother
hes going to ask how could you do that to her
shes my mom she changed
 why couldnt you just change
 why did you force her to leave
all anyones going to wonder is 
              ~WHY~


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NitaBoo commented on WHY

07-07-2009

This is nice but I don't see it as much of a poem...more like a let-me-get-this-off-my-chest, ya know....try taking one of your scattered thoughts and syncing them with rhyme and scheme...you have talent now shed some light on it......

fawndesno10

07/07/2009

i know what it looks like....i never have enuf time to sit and think of what to write...always in a rush to d something or go somewhere....never enug time to really put effort...jus fast thoughts...i work on them on the way...thank you for your thoughts and advice

Chaos128 commented on WHY

06-30-2009

I know this is gonna sound like I'm being a wise-ass, but that's not how it's intended. It's like being on a surfboard, Fawn; the better you get, the bigger and rougher the waves get, and you just have to keep getting better at dealing with them. It's tough, but the good thing is it eventually it gets you to a point where can deal with almost anything.

jandh4ever commented on WHY

06-17-2009

this poem is really good and cheating hurts. I learned that the hard way

fawndesno10

06/18/2009

thank you so much...i will read some of yours n comment them...funny thing is im still with him...and why i do not know... Mrs.T

Poetry is not the expression of personality but an escape from personality.

T. S. Eliot (1888-1965) American-English poet and playwright.

fawndesno10’s Poems (12)

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my lil sis 8
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LyFe AnD tHe MeSsEd Up TrIcKs It PlAyS oN yOu 1
WHY 3
i miss you dad.. 3
so precious my son.... 5