so precious my son....

5 Comments

  • fawndesno10
  • omgosh...been so long since i been on here....i miss this..

Poem Commentary

i just wanted to wrie something about my son....

so precious my son....

you are so young
but yet there are millions of ways to describe how wonderful and perfect your are
your beautiful hazel eyes and perfectly plump cheeks
your soft fluffy brown hair
your first two teeth
or just your wonderful presence
you are my son
my one and only son
why are you growing so fast
it seems time goes by so slowly
but you growing goes by so fast
it feels like just yesterday that we were celibrating the birth of you
then i snap into reality
you are no longer a newborn but a handsom ten month old baby boy
i am the pirate and you are the gold
without you id be so alone
for you are so precious to me
im glad that you are a part of my life
i am so thankful to be able to call you my son

Poem Comments

(5)

Please login or register

You must be logged in or register a new account in order to
leave comments/feedback and rate this poem.

Login or Register

NitaBoo commented on so precious my son....

07-24-2009

Very touching...children are meant to be seen as blessings...we as their parents reap the benefits of great memories....

christianprep commented on so precious my son....

06-27-2009

blessed be your son and you.. Let God help you along the way with troubles that will be hard to come by i pray that when he is even older he will turn out just like you or the way you want of him this is truly a good poem i like it

MsKrystle commented on so precious my son....

06-27-2009

This is so sweet....children can be such blessings.....This is a beautiful poem about your son. Nice job

fawndesno10

06/27/2009

thank you so much. he really is an amzing baby...

Chaos128 commented on so precious my son....

06-27-2009

This really quality work. "I am the pirate and you are the gold", is as evocative a line as I have ever read. This is the first time I've read yor work and the one thing I'm sure of is that I want to read more.

fawndesno10

06/27/2009

thank you so much....i love writing about him

BLYTEN commented on so precious my son....

06-18-2009

Nice work. Children tend to change you life so drastically. I have a 10 month old son as well and can relate to this. Sometimes your children can be the only driving force in your life. Enjoy every moment of him hun.

fawndesno10

06/24/2009

check out one of my poems....i entered it in a contest...please rate...

The true philosopher and the true poet are one, and a beauty, which is truth, and a truth, which is beauty, is the aim of both.

Ralph Waldo Emerson, American Poet (1803-1882)

fawndesno10’s Poems (12)

Title Comments
Title Comments
DoNe..... 4
hhhmmmmmm... 2
dreams... 1
not me for you; but your for me 3
Who will take me to the most perfect place in the world..... 4
my lil sis 8
getting myself to trust you.... 3
why not us???? 2
LyFe AnD tHe MeSsEd Up TrIcKs It PlAyS oN yOu 1
WHY 3
i miss you dad.. 3
so precious my son.... 5