Who will take me to the most perfect place in the world.....

4 Comments

Tags:
  • Emotional
    • ,
  • Love
    • ,
  • Fantasy
    • fawndesno10
    • omgosh...been so long since i been on here....i miss this..

    Poem Commentary

    A peaceful place that is cold to cuddle. A warm place like the fireplace and the thought of someone taking me to the best place in the world.a

    Who will take me to the most perfect place in the world.....
    A place in Colorado, High up in the snowy mountains where it's nice and peaceful. No worries except the snow but who is to say staying inside infront of a hot fireplace is a bad thing!!! Let me know if you go. I'll wait my whole life before I see that place unless you head that way first and take me :)

    Poem Comments

    (4)

    Please login or register

    You must be logged in or register a new account in order to
    leave comments/feedback and rate this poem.

    Login or Register

    UnrefinedYet commented on Who will take me to the most perfect place in the world.....

    06-27-2009

    short but with feeling still. i like it. :) it makes me wish its a place a could visit and find peace...
    Reply to Comment

    SmileyAngel138 commented on Who will take me to the most perfect place in the world.....

    06-27-2009

    nice poem, we all have that one place that we want to be and know and love...great poem :-)
    Reply to Comment

    christianprep commented on Who will take me to the most perfect place in the world.....

    06-27-2009

    i hope this was the one you were talking off i could not find colorodo but its a good poem i like it keep up on writting you do just fine
    Reply to Comment

    A poem begins as a lump in the throat, a sense of wrong, a homesickness, a lovesickness. It finds the thought and the thought finds the words.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

    fawndesno10’s Poems (12)

    Title Comments Submitted
    Title Comments Submitted
    DoNe..... 4 07/14/2009
    hhhmmmmmm... 2 07/04/2009
    dreams... 1 06/30/2009
    not me for you; but your for me 3 06/28/2009
    Who will take me to the most perfect place in the world..... 4 06/27/2009
    my lil sis 8 06/27/2009
    getting myself to trust you.... 3 06/24/2009
    why not us???? 2 06/23/2009
    LyFe AnD tHe MeSsEd Up TrIcKs It PlAyS oN yOu 1 06/18/2009
    WHY 3 06/17/2009
    i miss you dad.. 3 06/14/2009
    so precious my son.... 5 06/14/2009
    Top of Page