LyFe AnD tHe MeSsEd Up TrIcKs It PlAyS oN yOu

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  • fawndesno10
  • omgosh...been so long since i been on here....i miss this..

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feeling from the heart.....
(whats left of it)

LyFe AnD tHe MeSsEd Up TrIcKs It PlAyS oN yOu

its funny how one minute i can be depressed as fuck
and then the next minute just be thinkin happy thoughts......


   Like how you make me happy more than you make me sad
How you try your best to treat me the best that you can
 im proud to go around sayin your my man.
now i miss holding your hand and looking in your eyes
and KNOWING that your love for me is true
 and then i got locked up.
you cheated and you were unfaithful.
 Now when i hold your hand and look you in your eyes
i see all the other girls.
 in my opinion prettier girls.
girls that Once felt something.
 some kind of vibe between the two of you.
i dont exactly know why you get so many girls.
 but i am one of those girls that you Tell/Told you loved.
im  worried that im going to lose you.
i mean honestly.
what would i do without you.
your my world.
you'll always be mine.?
p.s. My HeArT wOuLd Be GoNe
i WoUlD bE gOnE
how would you explain to our son?
I Love You!!!

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Chaos128 commented on LyFe AnD tHe MeSsEd Up TrIcKs It PlAyS oN yOu

07-05-2009

It's an example I've used before, Fawn (to other poets). I guess the reason i repeat it is because it works for me. At one time another we all find ourselves beset by problems and circumstances that threaten to overwhelm us, but if you remember one thing: that you are the star in your own life, you'll realize that you can't let supporting actors steal the show. Your poem is very affecting.

Poetry is not the expression of personality but an escape from personality.

T. S. Eliot (1888-1965) American-English poet and playwright.

fawndesno10’s Poems (12)

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my lil sis 8
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LyFe AnD tHe MeSsEd Up TrIcKs It PlAyS oN yOu 1
WHY 3
i miss you dad.. 3
so precious my son.... 5