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    message received and still dawning

    Hope

    Broken buildings and shattered glass
    Is this all that belongs to the past?
    No crowds, no clouds
    , just murky gray
    one color, one chance, one day
    Destruction, death, decay
    In the mist of gloom 
    a single flower blooms



    1984 

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    Cryptics500 commented on Hope

    03-12-2015

    Go niggers! Jodie Foster

    Cryptics500 commented on Hope

    03-12-2015

    Go root for your dick cheese

    Cryptics500 commented on Hope

    03-12-2015

    can't get into the movie -- I don't get HBO kill the fucker Will Ferrell --he's a feral cat from Benji

    Pietro commented on Hope

    07-02-2013

    I found this poem quite enjoyable; it kind of filled me with a kind of deep sadness, very well written Peter

    BeckaWho commented on Hope

    02-25-2013

    Short and sweet... there is hope... nothing more to say...

    The true philosopher and the true poet are one, and a beauty, which is truth, and a truth, which is beauty, is the aim of both.

    Ralph Waldo Emerson, American Poet (1803-1882)

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