He's Mine

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  • Jealousy

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    Time is not a variable or factor.

    He's Mine
    He reminded me of the beauty
    How can I take his leave?
    a married man
    yet constant flirt
    I can only stand idle
    while he does all the work
    and now
    he expects no memories
    a snap of his fingers
    and I'm gone
    wanting him to remember me
    Is it so wrong?
    when it is I, who
    should be remembering you
    instead.


    1989

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    Cryptics500 commented on He's Mine

    01-03-2015

    Yes, I saw the Snapple, I don't miss a trick..
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    cttgad commented on He's Mine

    09-21-2012

    Knew a man like this once. Hmm lesson learned at such a young age is they'll stray with her they'll stray with you. Great poem.
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    When power leads man towards arrogance, poetry reminds him of his limitations. When power narrows the area of man's concern, poetry reminds him of the richness and diversity of existence. When power corrupts, poetry cleanses.

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