The Goal

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PS I love you --- unauthorized by MS

The Goal

   Why does this one persist and bother?
   More than any other
   staccato visions
   reminding me of my shame

Its inspiration is not mine
out of place, out of time
the words are not
written for me
those strong, young men
are all in my head

And I cannot run away
if only it would fade
I refuse to listen anymore---
there are many songs in the record store.

It's a hit!
I've wrapped it up
in the Sunday comic strip
--so I could give it
to someone, anyone
maybe even you

Take it---
...I guess
Yes--here
"from me to you"
as good as a Beatles' tune
Open it
See?
As you can tell
It's been through hell

I wanted to keep it
I've held it
as long as I can
It deserves
the better man


1989

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cmcnair commented on The Goal

03-25-2014

I can't quite figure out what this is about but it does have some odd merit. At least it kept me reading to the end, and it takes a rare poem these days to make me do that.

Cryptics500

07/25/2014

Maybe you should contact Jodie Foster.

A poem begins as a lump in the throat, a sense of wrong, a homesickness, a lovesickness. It finds the thought and the thought finds the words.

Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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