How We Become...

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  • theladyz
  • The hand of time lays heavy on heart today...

How We Become...

This sweet and irrestable
scent of mother soothes me
nurtured, loved and fondly fed
in one long and warm embrace.

Sweet voice that says I'll be ok
the cool hand on my fevered brow
that tender kiss that heals upon my
bruised and bleeding knee.

This knowing everything I ask
and reading favorite stories
again! again! a kiss and now
sleep well and dream tomorrow.

This patient teaching, 1,2,3
all colors, sounds and shapes
to write, to paint, to sing to dance
this time is just for me.

This glowing at my every gain
and tears shared for my sorrows
standing always in the shadows
 should there arise a need.

This, mother is how I've become
the person that so loves you
and is so filled with love that flows
through all my world to thee.






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HarverTomsson commented on How We Become...

06-11-2009

You had a darling mother. Cherish her now, before she lives only in your memories...................

sherry122 commented on How We Become...

05-15-2009

This poem has a warm touch in it, I liked the first and second paragraph very much, but the rest of the paragraph are not brought out that strongly, though the content is good.

theladyz

08/13/2009

Hello Sherry, and thank your for your thoughts. I rewrote the last paragraphs to smoothe the flow.

To have great poets there must be great audiences too.

Walt Whitman, American Poet (1819-1892)

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