Love Cycle

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    • JamilahAyanna
    • It's been a 5 year dry spell, but I'm back 😘😘

    Poem Commentary

    Juz a lil freestyle on love, juz love in all its plainest sinplicity and all the beauty thereof.......love in itself is the most beautiful thing there is, I juz find many ways to tell about it.....

    Love Cycle

    There where nights I cried tears that were bigger than all the oceans put together in rainy weather,

    And you stuck by my side high tide and all, Winter and Fall no matter the season you were there for a reason,

    Loving me to the fullest you took on the bullets that were intended for me and you made me see that there is more to thee than just a gorgeous face, still loosin the race I hide in discrace until you showed up again,

    And right then, at that moment, I saw an angel in front of my eyes no need for diguise, my trophy my prize,

    So you grabbed my hand and told me to stand, your wish my command, I'm at your every demmand,

    A love so true beyond me and you but yet we're so young so what are we to do,

    So promise you'll stay, we'll run away, durin night or day,

    No need to front, you're all that I want, don't mean to be blunt but,

    I want all of you, I swear it's true, without you I'm lost what am I to do,

    So give me your all I won't let you fall, whenever you feel alone I'm here to help you stand tall,

    But we're not perfect you see, who could ever be so we argue and fight and we disagree but then, suprise,

    We let all the pettiness reach it's demise so our love can touch the skies,

    There's nothin more beautiful than this, a hug and a kiss, all the things that I miss, and then I reminisce on all times we shared,

    Love? No we weren't prepared and I was pretty damn scared but nothin compared to how much you cared for me and thus,

    You have all my trust, lovin you is a must, life without you is unjust and filled with disgust,

    So I go to bed with thoughts of you in my head and think of our future ahead,

    I know we're forever, and whosoever can believe whatever but we can't end this love ever, but however,

    If you decide to leave, my heart will be filled with grieve but please believe, I'll be waitin right by that sea of my dried up tears ready to fill it up for I was decieved, so young and naive wearin my heart on my sleeve thinkin why did he leave til I tested and saw that, I had conceived,

    Nothin left to say for Heaven's sake my love was real and his was fake, my love for him was surely a mistake but it was a risk I was willing to take,

    So again I cry to the Heaven's above while I sit and wait patiently for my, true love....

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    Gertrude commented on Love Cycle

    05-19-2010

    Wow that was beautiful and I can't wait to read more.

    JamilahAyanna

    05/20/2010

    Thank u very much and pleez come by again....

    BadBadBear commented on Love Cycle

    12-18-2009

    A fantastic fire test of love that was promised yet not returned. Great write!

    JamilahAyanna

    01/04/2010

    Thank u very much, I'm glad someone gets da concept lol.

    MagicRock commented on Love Cycle

    10-08-2009

    Wow!!! You actually surprised me! I knew that you had potential but the is what we call in the souf(south) "Off da chain!" Keep writing and sharpening your skillz. Awesome work.

    poetress77 commented on Love Cycle

    07-19-2009

    This was very good, reading it from a 32 yr olds' perspective, it reminds me how innocent love was and is. It took me back to my youth, props. (A heads' up)- love gets better & better over time, keep it moving at all times,peace.

    JamilahAyanna

    07/21/2009

    I'm glad u seemed 2 appreciate it and I loved ya poems as well.....good luck 2 u in wuteva u do sis...

    cheohs commented on Love Cycle

    07-07-2009

    "I know we're forever, and whosoever can believe whatever but we can't end this love ever, but however," i like how those lines flow but the poem was ill. But I know what you mean, I relate to it cause we've all been there mami. Love's the wind we gotta let it be exactly what it is.

    When power leads man towards arrogance, poetry reminds him of his limitations. When power narrows the area of man's concern, poetry reminds him of the richness and diversity of existence. When power corrupts, poetry cleanses.

    John F. Kennedy (1917-1963) Thirty-fifth President of the USA

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