Love Vision

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I got inspired by translated Turkish Proverb that was translated by Powys Mathers.
Before you love,
Learn to run through snow
Leaving no footprint.

Love Vision

There is a love that I see.
I feel more like a penniless orphan in a candy store.
I am walking though a rainbow arch into a winter wonderland.
The trees within my sight are incased in a glass tomb of ice
But, am I too early or too late from hearing the birds’ chorus?
I see blanket of snow covering the ground.
I remember my camera wanted to stay in my house only to stay warm
And, my feet wanted to be in the same place.
Its only course of rebellion was to make a translucent footpath
But, there are other footpaths just like it.
Each path is claiming that they belonged to me despite their foot sizes are different
But, I do wished one set belong to another.

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Poetry is finer and more philosophical than history; for poetry expresses the universal, and history only the particular.

Aristotle (384 BC-322 BC) Greek philosopher.

1DreamStar’s Poems (32)

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Clearing The Voice To Speak 0
A Life To Lead Or Follow 0
The Visions of Love 0
Dreams of Love 0
My Love Seen 0
My Love Stories 0
An Ode to Love 0
Kaltfront im Juni 0
Snow 1
Prom night 0
The Sounds That Come Alive 0
The Path My Voice Has To Make 0
A Sight of Love 1
A War 1
More Special Friends 1
A Musical Adventure 0
Love Vision 0
A Voice For Love to See 0
Recalling Visions 0
My Strives … My Society 1
A Discussion on Love 0
The Sights and Sounds of My Loves and Hates 0
I am… 0
The Sounds of My Dreams 0
A Description of Friendship 0
What My Lazy Eyes Have Heard 0
Do You See What I Hear 0
What Is Love Without Hate 0
To Define my Love 0
Words Abound 0
A View From All Seasons 0
Some of the Investments of Sir Loin 1