Lovers Last

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  • Lost Love
    • rokinfire
    • is waiting for something exciting to happen!

    Poem Commentary

    This was made for someone very special to me. I hope that they will understand that I love them, and always will

    Lovers Last

     This, is my last breath
    With it I will tell you my heart
    For it is filled with secrets
    That have been kept within the dark

    I loved you, always have
    Now it's all in past
    I write this letter
    Hoping you will understand
    I need you!
    I need your smile, your warmth
    I need your soft embrace, your laugh
    I need everything from you

    It feels as if you are too far away
    Too far away for my grasp
    All I want is for you to be here
    All I want is for you to be happy

    I give you my heart
    In hopes that you won't break it
    I give you my soul
    In hopes that you will lift it
    I give you everything
    In hopes that you will love me

    This, is my last breath
    With it I told you my heart

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    jannifer commented on Lovers Last

    06-05-2009

    i love your poem so much great work .that person should be very happy to here what u wrote iwish people woul alwayz beleave our true feeling check out my poems.
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    Poetry comes nearer to vital truth than history.

    Plato (BC 427-BC 347) Greek philosopher.

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