The day

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I started this poem last year. I found it in my old writing book and decided to finish it

The day

There is a light
That guards my heart
Protecting me from the dark
The day you said goodbye
Was the day the light went out
The pain came pouring in
Crushing my last bit of hope
Can't find a reason to live

My hope died with you
My heart cried for you
Those feelings you put me through
Are now a big hole in my heart

In this world I now live in
There is no love
Only pain
The tears were a river
Leading me away from you

I ran from my feelings
Because of my ingnorance
I lost you
People say ingnorane is bliss
This time it's hell

The day you said goodbye
Tore me apart
I can't think of any reason
Any reason why someone would do this
All I can remember is that day
And all the pain it brought

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The true philosopher and the true poet are one, and a beauty, which is truth, and a truth, which is beauty, is the aim of both.

Ralph Waldo Emerson, American Poet (1803-1882)

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