Man, if she could be the one

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    • anaisnais
    • Enters 2011, with all best intentions and wishes to all here at OP, have a good year whether I know you or not, and don't forget to check by my profile for new poems once in a while! Old and new friends whether I know you or not - welcome, come share, come learn together.... All constructive critique welcome, so that I might iimprove on my current level of works and move another step closer to my goal/ambition... Response to reads, & comments or friendly raport depends on health as to when!

    Man, if she could be the one

     Tell her you love her,
    reassure her
    Hold her close and cuddle her
    Treasure her
    Go see her,
    no matter how far away she lives
    Always make an effort
    let her know she is worthy
    Let her know
    that she is beautiful to you,
    worthy of your love
    Hold hands and kiss her
    Be unpredictable
    send flowers, love cards
    tokens of love, letters
    and appreciation
    Repeatedly
    visit her when sick
    Be there for her always
    Hold her when sad or upset
    Do not be afraid
    to show your feelings
    Nor share your hearts desires
    Share secrets with her
    Spend time together,
    relax, have fun and laugh
    Give up your seat,
    tidy up and play your part
    Open doors for her
    Guard every word and breath
    Make sure she gets home safe with a call;
    better still see her home to the door
    If you’d give your life for her
    die for her, defend her, protect her
    Then wait for her,
    however long it takes
    The sex can wait
    Man, if she could be the one
    with whom to share a life-time together
    Respect her …

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    Len commented on Man, if she could be the one

    09-08-2010

    I liked this poem! But not for the same reasons that a woman might. If a man did have of those things for a woman he has not slept with he's crazy, or forever stuck in the friend zone. Your words were inspirational to those of us who have waited in vain for sex that never came.
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    anaisnais

    09/08/2010

    I guess then some of you are looking either a) in wrong places or b) at the wrong women, lol. It means so much more to a woman to be accepted for who she is and to see qualities of personality in a man... Of course there is no reason once the timing is right to discuss how things are progresing between you periodically so both know where they are headed. Thanks for stoppping by to read and comment, your thoughts appreciated...

    Forestbird commented on Man, if she could be the one

    07-02-2010

    I am lucky one. My man is like the one you are telling about. We meet in our late fourties and poetry was the start of our relationship. it will be 6 years soon since our weding
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    anaisnais

    07/03/2010

    Smiles, and congatulations on both your catch and the anniversary... You must be in your element having landed one of these rare diamonds! Thanks fot stoppuing by to comment I appreciate your view and voice! Glad you liked, kindest thoughts, Anna-Marie.

    cmlestrade commented on Man, if she could be the one

    11-10-2009

    I once joked with my boss that i would create clone man and he would have all these lovely traits. She told me she would buy the first one that rolled off the assembly line. Of course this would be great. I'd love to know what the males list would look like.
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    anaisnais

    11/10/2009

    Maybe one man might right the list for the ideal woman... smiles, I'd liek to see it too..but I'm geussing most have their needs met for women are so much more open emotionally and tuned in with it...of course there are some who this does not apply to! Wouldn't do for all to be identical though really, I feel it adds a little spice to life...thanks for stopping by...

    Karma885 commented on Man, if she could be the one

    11-04-2009

    DAMNNN SUCH A TOUCHIN POEM...I LIKE IT...IT GETS 10, I LIKE THE WORDS U USED. SO SWEET AND KINDA IN WISH ALL MEN THOUGHT LIKE THIS... READ N COMMENT MY POEM
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    anaisnais

    11/05/2009

    Don't most women? lol. Of course I shall comment back...thanks for stopping by!

    JCKasper commented on Man, if she could be the one

    11-04-2009

    Nothing less than TLC to be expected ..... Mutually inclusive. Very NIce!
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    anaisnais

    11/04/2009

    Of course! lol. Thanks very much for stopping by to comment.

    If I feel physically as if the top of my head were taken off, I know that is poetry.

    Emily Dickinson (1830-1886) American poet.

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