Lost windy weather

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  • anaisnais
  • Enters 2011, with all best intentions and wishes to all here at OP, have a good year whether I know you or not, and don't forget to check by my profile for new poems once in a while! Old and new friends whether I know you or not - welcome, come share, come learn together.... All constructive critique welcome, so that I might iimprove on my current level of works and move another step closer to my goal/ambition... Response to reads, & comments or friendly raport depends on health as to when!

Lost windy weather

Who knows where the wind blows
where it comes from
where it goes
where balloons and kites will drift ‘till gone
Planes will fly as it passes on
while sun burns ground
and resevoirs dry
and scarves and papers float on by
On windy days
leaves rustle in trees
and boats drift on crest wind misbehaves
This mighty force uncontrolled
does as it please’s not as it’s told
Where does it begin
Where does it cease
What is it’s purpose
What direction it’s peace

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WordSlinger commented on Lost windy weather

01-01-2011

Nice, as a roofers point of view, I'd like to bottle it up and sell it cheap, by one get one free, brilliant poem, precious as wind its self, Happy New Year WS

Poetry is either something that lives like fire inside you or else it is nothing, an empty formalized bore around which pedants can endlessly drone their notes and explanations.

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