When all of nature weeps

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    • anaisnais
    • Enters 2011, with all best intentions and wishes to all here at OP, have a good year whether I know you or not, and don't forget to check by my profile for new poems once in a while! Old and new friends whether I know you or not - welcome, come share, come learn together.... All constructive critique welcome, so that I might iimprove on my current level of works and move another step closer to my goal/ambition... Response to reads, & comments or friendly raport depends on health as to when!

    When all of nature weeps

    Tears too late to regenerate
    and all because we acted too late
    Future generations will face decline
    If we continue to be ignorant to every sign

    Ozone has odor like chlorine bleach
    Its now to stop  now to teach
    For exposure produces headaches, burning eyes
    irritated respiratory passages, asthmatic sighs

    All of nature in decline
    Don't waste water treat it like wine
    Be careful that you sort your rubbish
    Recycle everything we publish

    What you buy is important too
    As is how much liquid flushes down the loo
    Then the factories where the 'stuffs' produced
    need reduce the smog that they've induced

    Stop pollution at its source
    And where possible walk of course
    Or otherwise lets travel together
    Protect our plants, trees and our weather

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    ryotboi commented on When all of nature weeps

    09-13-2010

    beautifully written. the environment & our fate are intimately linked--wish the world of people would understand this more. i've mcs so i can relate. thanks for sharing!
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    anaisnais

    10/08/2010

    My heart goes out to you with your mcs, I don't think many poeple relate peoples sufferings to the condition of our planet - they don't seem to recognise these things as going hand in hand and do not own responsibility for their own actions... More needs be doen to raise further awareness... Thanks for supporting this poem... appreciate your view/thoughts...

    StandingBear commented on When all of nature weeps

    09-11-2010

    Anna-Marie, this great write of yours should be the "poster child poem" embraced by Greenpeace! You just have to read a similar poem i've written, titled .. "Into Them .. Into Me .. Into You" SBear
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    anaisnais

    10/08/2010

    lol.Re poster poem hahaha... chance would be a fine thing! Of course I shall take a look at your poem... Thanks for taking tie to read my pieces, your views always appreciated!

    ApaqRasgirl commented on When all of nature weeps

    09-10-2010

    wow, hon, this is another wonderful write in defense of nature, and this would be another good one to add to a cause in the forums.......wonderful write dear..........loved it.......love asha
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    anaisnais

    09/11/2010

    Thankyou so much, am so pleased you enjoyed, will try to add to forums when I get a moment free... appreciate your passing through my poetry today and adding your voice to support this cause... Have a great weekend!

    Insideme commented on When all of nature weeps

    09-10-2010

    You know all you said in this beautiful work is easily accomplished with little effort...so why dont we all do it? that is my questtion. people have lost consideration for the mother that gives life to us all.
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    anaisnais

    09/11/2010

    That's really nice of you to say, thankyou for the add and comment... We do all to easy close down to the beauty around us everyday, such a pity - we need get back to nature... and stop poluting our world... so often through laziness. So glad you liked this...

    FranzJ commented on When all of nature weeps

    09-09-2010

    I agree wholehearted - what will be left for our grandchildern and great grandchildern - lets stop it now
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    anaisnais

    01/16/2011

    Thankyou FranzJ, so glad you are one that agrees of the importance! Good to see you, sorry this is late, missed for some reason - but appreciated no less! Anna-Marie.

    In science one tries to tell people, in such a way as to be understood by everyone, something that no one ever knew before. But in poetry, it's the exact opposite.

    Franz Kafka (1883-1924) Czech writer.

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