Fresh sheets

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    • anaisnais
    • Enters 2011, with all best intentions and wishes to all here at OP, have a good year whether I know you or not, and don't forget to check by my profile for new poems once in a while! Old and new friends whether I know you or not - welcome, come share, come learn together.... All constructive critique welcome, so that I might iimprove on my current level of works and move another step closer to my goal/ambition... Response to reads, & comments or friendly raport depends on health as to when!

    Fresh sheets

    Seductive ink flows
    over silken sheets
    shifting as you move over them
    smudging their appearance
    spoiling crisp clean surface
    Blots of fluidity
    proof of one living
    DNA recorded for a time
    excited the quill quickens
    rushes over
    as the mind wills ever onwards
    determined to finish
    Then a sigh and peace
    as dreams float on new linen

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    HarverTomsson commented on Fresh sheets

    11-15-2010

    A love letter, perhaps? The mystery adds to the poem's allure. Harv
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    anaisnais

    11/16/2010

    It could be anything the reader cares to imagine, but yes there are hints to a double meaning romance or more side to the write, so thankyou for noticing... Really appreciate the feedback... Anna-Marie.

    When power leads man towards arrogance, poetry reminds him of his limitations. When power narrows the area of man's concern, poetry reminds him of the richness and diversity of existence. When power corrupts, poetry cleanses.

    John F. Kennedy (1917-1963) Thirty-fifth President of the USA

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