A summer sigh

2 Comments

  • anaisnais
  • Enters 2011, with all best intentions and wishes to all here at OP, have a good year whether I know you or not, and don't forget to check by my profile for new poems once in a while! Old and new friends whether I know you or not - welcome, come share, come learn together.... All constructive critique welcome, so that I might iimprove on my current level of works and move another step closer to my goal/ambition... Response to reads, & comments or friendly raport depends on health as to when!

A summer sigh

The lush of the land lies as velvet moss green carpet
The river rushing its morning wash
rumbling as it spins twisting and turning its tidal path
over the chance carried stones to the seas
Where the coastal sands of time are met
Meeting waves pulled by undercurrents
Finding rocks, kale, seaweed and moss covered
Just as the hair of cherubs faces foamed
Then gently adorned with shell and mollusk jewels
and salty sea air crusts crystal formations alongside
In come the tides bringing with them oceanic treasures
Driftwoods, wreckage, salvage,
that have crashed and bashed the cliffs along the way
To finally rest ashore and be renewed
To become beach combers delights
Trinkets gifts or items for the home

Poem Comments

(2)

Please login or register

You must be logged in or register a new account in order to
leave comments/feedback and rate this poem.

Login or Register

Luwonda commented on A summer sigh

11-16-2010

I really like this poem! The feeling and lovely picture I get of the beach.

anaisnais

01/16/2011

Thankyou, pleased you could take enjoyment fo this piece. Good to see you here, welcome! Anna-Marie.

WordSlinger commented on A summer sigh

11-16-2010

Trinkets huh, nice this poem is a beautiful trinket, :) I like this one also, beautiful, ty WS

anaisnais

01/16/2011

Thanks WS, so kind of you to you enjoyed the beauty given to me this day, thankyou so much, Anna-Marie.

Poetry is not an expression of the party line. It's that time of night, lying in bed, thinking what you really think, making the private world public, that's what the poet does.

Allen Ginsberg (1926-1997) U.S. poet.

anaisnais’s Poems (18)

Title Comments
Title Comments
Long live love 1
No more I love you's... 3
A summer sigh 2
A gardener's delight 2
Alcohol pay checks 2
Fresh sheets 1
Lost windy weather 1
In recognition of Wilfred Owen - 1893-1918 (Acrostic) 1
Forbidden islands beauty 1
Behind these walls 2
Tortured body 1
October nectar 1
Better paint a smile 1
When all of nature weeps 5
Natural gemstones of life 7
Man, if she could be the one 11
Duck eggs for breakfast 11
Umbrella 11