No more I love you's...

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  • anaisnais
  • Enters 2011, with all best intentions and wishes to all here at OP, have a good year whether I know you or not, and don't forget to check by my profile for new poems once in a while! Old and new friends whether I know you or not - welcome, come share, come learn together.... All constructive critique welcome, so that I might iimprove on my current level of works and move another step closer to my goal/ambition... Response to reads, & comments or friendly raport depends on health as to when!

No more I love you's...

Saturday 9:30am it's drizzling
but still I here the charming melodies
of garden birds calling away
From the window where I sit
I can see out onto the street
All is quiet except for the odd fluttering
and the familiar cheery face
of the postman doing his rounds
as a yappy dog sees him on his way

The recognisable clatter of my letterbox
Followed by the flipping, flapping, flop
of letters falling on to my tiled floor
I rise from my chair to retrieve them
White envelopes and a variety of junk mail
No difference there then
Just how  long ago was it
Since I last received a cheery hello,
miss you, thankyou, love you?

I blame it all on modern technology of course
Never did I think I too would be entangled by the web
Too old now for that
my schooling long since passed
But no, slowly I get caught up into emails
Facebook, Twitter and the likes
Being pretty housebound it brings me company
I/we made new friends together
And now look forward to my newer daily mailbox

Even with computer progression the unwanted mail comes
Not the bills, reminders nor bank
They're mainly formalities with direct debits anyway
But scammers and unwanted advertisers
That push their way into your home
no matter how you try to block them
So desperate are they to clench a deal
In this climate of recession
Where so many have no work

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Insideme commented on No more I love you's...

02-17-2011

What a throrough and beautiful depiction of the world through your eyes. Good write!

anaisnais

03/11/2011

Thanks so much for leaving your thoughts, so glad you enjoyed...

StandingBear commented on No more I love you's...

01-22-2011

Anna-Marie, a well written poem for the times. Mostly gone today are the days when one could go to their mailbox to retrieve those Norman Rockwell/Hallmark greeting cards that would eventually line the inside arched oval door frames leading to the entertainment den where relatives/guests would be entertained and great company shared, especially during the holidays.

HarverTomsson commented on No more I love you's...

12-31-2010

Greetings Anna-Marie, Do hope Craig at least says the "I love you"s as before. We used to get over 60 cards during the holidays, but due to email and the price of postage, we got less tan ten cards this year. Alot of e-greetings however. Wishing you the best today and hope for a brighter kinder new year. your friend, Harv

anaisnais

12/31/2010

Thanks Harv, and yes no problems where the I love you's come in from my hubby - was just referring to modern technolgy taking over like you say yourself... so sad to see ieces of history slowly disappearing, those few moments when we take time to record a message to loved ones near and far that they can keep should they wish... Some just cannot be replaced in my opinion... The best to you and yours as we enter the New Year and beyond too... kindest thoguhts, Anna-Marie.

Poetry is finer and more philosophical than history; for poetry expresses the universal, and history only the particular.

Aristotle (384 BC-322 BC) Greek philosopher.

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No more I love you's... 3
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Alcohol pay checks 2
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Lost windy weather 1
In recognition of Wilfred Owen - 1893-1918 (Acrostic) 1
Forbidden islands beauty 1
Behind these walls 2
Tortured body 1
October nectar 1
Better paint a smile 1
When all of nature weeps 5
Natural gemstones of life 7
Man, if she could be the one 11
Duck eggs for breakfast 11
Umbrella 11