my saute to every sister

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    a salute to every sister in the world

    my saute to every sister

    oh my sister
    oh my sister,
    the times we spent during our childhood
    while you taught me to read and write
    to caution me about bad and show me the path towards right
    the way you helped me to grow into a man
    and learn to lead a dignified life
    is worthy of remembering for days to come
    and the days bygone to rembmer.
    oh my sister
    oh my sister
    you helped our mom in her chores
    you helped our family in making the scores as one of the best families
    now your absence makes our family to feel your absence
    we need you really to make your presence
    but the thoughts of you my sister
    makes me feel strong and
    face to the world which is big and long.

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    cttgad commented on my saute to every sister

    09-23-2012

    You give the reader a visual description of your sister here, which make this read enjoyable. Keep up the great work!

    Poetry is when an emotion has found its thought and the thought has found words.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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