Neighbors

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Neighbors

The shack, an eyesore, stands arrogantly nonetheless
On long, unpainted stilts
Vulgar against the landscape.
Garbage spills over the hillside.
No grass or shrubbery is found--just beer bottles
To decorate the muddy lawn.
No plumbing exists within the house or without.
The inhabitants, as grossly incongruent
To civilization as their dwelling,
Spill out its doors the first of every month
To collect the government checks that will
Finance the next few days' reign of terror.

The wretched, worthless little man exists to torment.
Twenty eight years of age and no ambition
Beyond the next bottle of tequila,one-night affairs, and
Harrassing the neighbors, mainly me. Stealing gas for his car,
Stealing coal to heat his house, because to buy coal
Would cost him a few drinks. Stealing anything that can be sold for tequila, beer.

Fighting, boasting, vandalizing.
I regard his ridiculous antics with impotent rage
And swear to myself the devil is his sire
He lights firecrackers--even dynamite, while I am sleeping.
Brings me startled, awake.
Punches his pedal, roaring in mufflerless annoyance
As he passes my window at 3 AM.
Then, knowing he has woke me, does a tremendous final
U-turn on my lawn, roars his engine in a last burst of defiance
Yells a few savage obscenities, goes on home
To rest for tomorrow's rerun.

The wife upholds him in his atrocities
Although he makes her and the children suffer too.
I cannot pity her. But the children-
Some days my heart drips sympathy for them
But on days such as this one, I can only count them the spawn
Of a roach, a devil. Are they innocent or are they apprentices?
Waiting to fill Daddy's shoes?

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MrGee commented on Neighbors

11-24-2009

This is a well written poem. The meter is excellent. and you paint a very good picture in the readers mind. I like the use of the metaphor in the line that reads - Some days my heart drips sympathy for them. a well deserved 10

copergirl

11/25/2009

Thank you kindly for the rating and the comment. It is my firm belief that in poetry lies the Truths and this poem came from the heart--a frustrated one at that time. Blessings!Marlene

If I feel physically as if the top of my head were taken off, I know that is poetry.

Emily Dickinson (1830-1886) American poet.

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