Sixteen

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    Sixteen

    I was sixteen when I met you
    The prettiest age a "woman" can be,
    You said, but then you said a lot of things
    And because you uttered them, I believed them
    If I was pretty, I sure wasn't smart
    You painted such a rosy picture
    Of the future, just us and a life
    Of domestic bliss.
    Just what I thought I wanted
    What I thought you wanted, too.
    'Til I told you about the miniature you inside me
    Then the vision, like you, vanished.

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    Lolee commented on Sixteen

    09-16-2009

    Basically it's true...a man only wants one thing, and it ain't babies, baby. There are some good men out there who will step up to the plate. Good luck finding one. Well written.

    wheelsal commented on Sixteen

    06-28-2009

    You know truths and say them well. I am fast loving your poetry. .....................................

    HeavenlyAngel commented on Sixteen

    01-15-2009

    We woman can be so naive we we're young and in love... or just in love...

    Hathor4Wine commented on Sixteen

    01-14-2009

    a wonderful message and a lesson learned...and what a difference when she took them goggles off...

    To have great poets there must be great audiences too.

    Walt Whitman, American Poet (1819-1892)

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