Not Good Today.....

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    Not Good Today.....

    A Million Miles, A Million Miles......
    I Don't have time to stop......
    A Million Miles, A Million Miles......
    I Need to find my way out......

    I really don't like the start of day......
    I really don't like what people say......
    Talk like they really do care......
    They cut you open with surgical skill......
    Poison everything they can find inside......
    Sew you back up and steal your pride......

    Inside we began to die......
    Not being able to trust, believe or cry......
    You will close up tight like you are in a shell......
    Stay away from humans all the time......
    Hoping they will all go to hell......
    You are willing to hold the gate open for them......

    Can't resist the desire to sleep......
    Don't want to do a damn thing......
    Don't want to be bothered by any of the sheep......
    Not even the sun from the day is allowed.....
    This is how I choose to exist to be safe......
    I just don't want anymore games played for my sake......

    A Million Miles, A Million Miles......
    I don't have time.

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    WriterGenevieve commented on Not Good Today.....

    03-22-2011

    Wow. I love it. I feel what you're writing and understand it too.

    RAYTHEONSKY commented on Not Good Today.....

    01-30-2011

    I'm gonna quote YOU... "This society wants to tell people how to live and act, pisses me off." I think the above states this well...and I agree...feelin' ya, buddy ;)

    tenderpoison commented on Not Good Today.....

    01-21-2011

    I so completely relate to this sometimes, I don't know what to say. I know for me, it's a lifelong battle with depression, which I choose not to medicate, but deal with by holding myself accountable for the motivations behind everything I do and say. don't know if that makes sense...but yeah, somedays, the whole world can just suck it. lol

    boomboom56

    01/30/2011

    It still does suck alot. But things are better when we have some control over our lives. This society wants to tell people how to live and act, pisses me off. You hang in there and drop me a line anytime.

    1990lh commented on Not Good Today.....

    05-31-2010

    "A Million Miles, A Million Miles...... I don't have time". wow this was a great read i so felt this.you just feel like everything and everbody is against you. you just dont wanna deal with anything, amazing write.

    boomboom56

    06/16/2010

    Thanks for the heart felt comment. Latelty things have been so wrong and lonely.

    1990lh

    06/16/2010

    yeah tell me about. things just keep taken a turn for the worst, but i try to keep my head up anyways

    midnite commented on Not Good Today.....

    11-24-2009

    Poison everything they can find inside... Sew you back up and steal your pride... How so many times I felt that way too! The world can be so ugly sometimes, I decided not to let it win! Great Write Boom!

    boomboom56

    11/25/2009

    I have turned over a new leaf in life myself. Thanks for taking the time. Peace.

    To have great poets there must be great audiences too.

    Walt Whitman, American Poet (1819-1892)

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