Save Yourself

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Save Yourself

Walking in an ally I see the shadows of three,
But it turns out they are all me.
Pain and sorrow shot through my spine
As if I were crushed by a giant pine.

“today is the day” they all say in tune.
Then they form an image of my grandpa’s saloon.
They showed me a video of when I put on my first mask.
I used to think it would be a simple task.

I can see fear in their eyes.
Why do they all look hypnotized?
Don’t you know you can see the soul through the eyes?

My mask is a smile,
But it can only last awhile.
None know of its fake,
But will the truth take the cake?

So in the sea of lies
I’m the one who dies.
Smothered by this mask
my heart just wants to ask.
“Why did I have to be so stupid
Even thou I was only a kid?”

It doesn’t matter what or how.
Just go ahead and through in the towel.
I can not be saved
This street has already been paved.

Wearing masks does not give you glory,
But hey, I’m done this is the end of my story.

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TheAngelOfDeath commented on Save Yourself

06-25-2009

You are a very well educated poet are you sure your 12 lol your words speak to me and if you want a mentor i can teach you even more about poetry and how it is writin.. You Could become a very well know poet if you keep up learning new things everyday.

Phoenix9 commented on Save Yourself

05-17-2009

well done, enjoyable a 10

Phoenix9 commented on Save Yourself

05-17-2009

well done, enjoyable a 10

Poetry is not the expression of personality but an escape from personality.

T. S. Eliot (1888-1965) American-English poet and playwright.

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