Demon of the flame

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    Demon of the flame

    Wicked one, evil one

    Hear my call

    my prayer

    my curse

    The light is fading

    The flames arise

    And I call upon you


    Wicked one, evil one

    Worker of sin

                of pain

                of burning

    The silence is killed

    The screams arise

    And I call upon you


    Wicked one, evil one

    Killer of peace

             of love

             of life

    Love is ending

    The hate arise

    And I call upon you


    Wicked one, evil one

    Present of war

                of death

                of destruction

    The world is ending

    The evil arise

    And I call upon you

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    gregster commented on Demon of the flame

    08-23-2010

    he is wixked and evil so why u call upon him instead OF GOD CHRIST JESUS TO SET ALL FREE....well read free will and his pain our salvation on my list i beg
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    Emy717

    08/23/2010

    why call upon an "ALMIGHTY GOD" who "told" the preacher of my familys church tha i'm to be banished to hell in the name of the almighty lord. simply ecause i'm in a body that is not mine. i'm srry i'm not a girl in my head but i still want to FEEL like a boy. bill of right something americas fathers fought for. "PURSUT OF HAPPYNESS"

    brokenhearted11 commented on Demon of the flame

    07-21-2010

    LOVE THIS! i cant put my finger on it, but something about this intrigues the reader. draws them in and wont let them go, keeping its bony fingers grasped tightly on the attention of the audience. very good work. keep writing :)
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    Emy717

    07/22/2010

    lol i wrote this when some one told me they hated axel (from kingdom hearts) so i wrote this as a tribute to him. it was i joke but i fell in love with it

    Rhymer commented on Demon of the flame

    12-23-2009

    Definately spooky and dark write. Had cold chills reading this descriptive write. 10 from me.
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    Poetry is not an expression of the party line. It's that time of night, lying in bed, thinking what you really think, making the private world public, that's what the poet does.

    Allen Ginsberg (1926-1997) U.S. poet.

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