Sea Shore


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Poem Commentary

We all be determine to make it or be somebody in life. But we fail an sink in our mess then in what we do. I realize in life that I couldnt do it by myself so I had to turn to God. He help me not to sink in the water and keep my head held up High.

Sea Shore

Diving in the water
the water of the sea
the sea, sea shore
stroking the hands, kicking the feet
head held high,determine not to sink
sink beneath the beautiful sea,sea shore
fighting to make it
in the middle,
middle of the sea
right before the beautiful Sun
set, straight beneath the sea, sea shore
out breath, water to deep
waves trying to take advange of me
keep focus
 what much beauty,catching the sun,before it set
Set beneath the sea, sea shore
focusing straight ahead
What a distance, while the waves
gushing the body, rapidly side to side
like a fish about take it last breath
floating across the sea, sea shore
determine to live,
must make to the beautiful Sun,before
it set, set beneath the sea, sea shore
searching the sea, see know land
waves flooding over the head
gasping for air
determine to make, make it to the beautiful sun,before it
set, set beneath the sea, sea shore
sinking down, see light in the water
weak I am,
What a beauty, I made it
Just before the sun,set
set beneath the sea,sea shore
determine I was, just to see,the sun  set underneath
the sea, sea shore. 

Wakeitha Kilpatrick

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Kingwebstar commented on Sea Shore


Beautiful words coming from a beautiful poet . Stay happy writing as i stay happy reading.

omari commented on Sea Shore


Your depiction of a struggling for life shows the power of determination in the midst of a vast circumstance but also taking the majesty of nature....good job

When power leads man towards arrogance, poetry reminds him of his limitations. When power narrows the area of man's concern, poetry reminds him of the richness and diversity of existence. When power corrupts, poetry cleanses.

John F. Kennedy (1917-1963) Thirty-fifth President of the USA

Wakeitha’s Poems (68)

Title Comments
Title Comments
Supernatural Love 1
My Love(Pt.3) 3
My Love(pt.2) 1
My Love (part 1) 3
Inner-Beauty 16
Daily Inspiration(D
Trust 3
Father's Day 1
Shekinah Glory Cloud 6
Sing 1
Daily Inspirational
(Day 11)
Daily Inspiratinal(
Day 10)
Reality 2
Daily Inspiration(D
ay 9)
Time 1
Break The Cycle 9
Freedom 1
Heart Ache 9
Daily Inspiration(D
ay 7)
Daily Inspiration (Day 8) 0
Daily Inspiration(D
ay 6)
Daily Inspiration(D
ay 5)
Daily inspiration(d
ay 4)
Daily Inspiration(3
Daily Inspiration(D
ay 2)
Daily inspiration(D
ay 1)
Sea Shore 2
Big Sis/Little Sis 1
Rattle Snake 1
screaming 1
Compare 1
Tame the Animal 1
Word Faucet 1
frustrated 3
(?) 6
Fight 0
Searching 4
No, Limit 7
Thank You 2
Try 2
A talk with Jesus 0
I Need Thee (GOD) 0
Tangle Up 1
Chosen 2
Build a Relationship 0
Fallen Short 0
A Calm Voice 2
Widerness 4
Wake Up 1
Grace 5
About Me 2
Breath Of Life 5
PAIN 1 4
Weeping 2
The Moment 3
What 3
Precious Moment 3
Heart Beat 2
Hurt 3
Give Up 2
Peace 6
Bride 4
My Love 4
Know 6