See You See Me

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    Two sides, one face
    I do embrace
    My inner giggling whore~

    hahaaaaaa
     Bad Silly Katylove~

    See You See Me

     

    Standing before me

    The Big Dirty Whore

    Winking smirking taunting lurking

    I turn away and once again

    become

    The girl next door.

     

    Pretty white blouse

    With sensible shoes

    Socially acceptable you see

    the soccer mom, the lovely wife

    I am

    The perfect  ruse.

     

    I lick her mouth

    And search my eyes

    For who she is and who I am not

    Innocent simmering shyly glimmering

    We discover

    Truth resides in lies.

     

    © Katylove 2009

     

     

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    BlackButterfly1 commented on See You See Me

    07-22-2010

    "Truth resides in lies." Deep statement! Makes me think...
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    freind commented on See You See Me

    08-19-2009

    ok i dont know what to say about this one??? are we confused who cares. i love your writes keep on doing what you do. give me some more .i am ready for it. nice writes luv.
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    Artie commented on See You See Me

    08-08-2009

    I love the way you show the difference in the world's view of the person, and the inner view. 10 from me.
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    Katylove

    08/09/2009

    and I love that you love that~ peace~

    poetikkk commented on See You See Me

    08-07-2009

    This poem is a wonderfully evocative poem of mystery. We play the game, appear one way and desire something else. It is a tension of following our impulses that we can confront. This poem had me at the first stanza. The woman who wants to be free of certain prsribed things. There is passion here, eager to breathe. I liked this.
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    Katylove

    08/09/2009

    You see... you see... That means the world to me

    Katylove

    08/09/2009

    You see... you see... That means the world to me

    ccslim commented on See You See Me

    08-07-2009

    Dang mirrors anyways! Great content that played out to a fitted end. Flows through nicely! A daily question is who's shoes do I have on today?
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    Katylove

    08/07/2009

    LOL! I change my shoes every couple of hours..Spanx You~

    In science one tries to tell people, in such a way as to be understood by everyone, something that no one ever knew before. But in poetry, it's the exact opposite.

    Franz Kafka (1883-1924) Czech writer.

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