Suicide Poem

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    Suicide Poem

    Was I bewitched so by the thin red line
    To notice not that time released its hold
    And let pale Iris snip the silver twine
    To steal sweet youth before it turned to gold.
    Existence now is not what I was told;
    No seraphim and harps to grace my ear,
    Just silence, painful silence, and the cold
    Discomfort of my masochistic fear,
    So icy cold, yet somehow seems to sear
    My soul until the ache's too much to bear,
    As mortal life mirages now appear:
    Intangible are they; away they tear.
    Mistake, it was; the curatin fell too soon
    when razor's edge did charm me like the moon.

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    Kingwebstar commented on Suicide Poem

    06-06-2012

    Yet another excellent poem.great job Love DA KING

    LadyLuck commented on Suicide Poem

    03-19-2010

    for me this poem was a beauty.... haunted by dark thoughts, however also being sinfully erotic i find a kind of sex appeal to dark poetry though i am very bad at writing it. u have quite the gift to personify the shadow as you do

    angel2380

    03/19/2010

    thank you.

    trocka7 commented on Suicide Poem

    06-16-2009

    Once again, I can't resist commenting on this, which by the way, I haven't felt compelled to do with a lot of others I have read.....very deep, yet hauntingly beautiful. I identify with these feelings, and certainly did when I was your age....you have a true talent, and I know you will surely find all the happiness you seek if you continue to search for it. Use your gift to dispel the shadows...

    lonewolf commented on Suicide Poem

    04-30-2009

    very dark, i enjoyed it

    Poetry is finer and more philosophical than history; for poetry expresses the universal, and history only the particular.

    Aristotle (384 BC-322 BC) Greek philosopher.

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