The Heart and Soul

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    • cheezchic
    • Lead with your soul and be proud for some have not even a heart

    The Heart and Soul

    My heart lays on the floor torn into pieces
    Slowly you've gathered them all up
    One by one you have mended each piece together
    You now hold my heart in your hands
    It is now my gift to you.....

    However my soul will always be mine.....

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    Olan01 commented on The Heart and Soul

    12-27-2010

    Your poem tells a find story of a broken heart; a reverse humpty-dumpty, if you would. The last shows a holding back of the force that animates the heart, so you giving him/her only a shell. Well done, my friend. Olan. P.S. A person should never give themselves totally to anyone but themselves.

    winterkou commented on The Heart and Soul

    12-09-2010

    nice poem. says alot in just a short statement. Good write.

    Poetry comes nearer to vital truth than history.

    Plato (BC 427-BC 347) Greek philosopher.

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