THE PAIN INNER ME

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    THE PAIN INNER ME

    The pain inner me is screaming for a voice
    It's release eminent so I haven't got a choice
    I've tried so hard to contain this fury inside
    Aggressive even it no longer chooses to hide
    This stranger no longer wishes to be contained
    Making her presence ever known and her name Pain
    Giving her the proper introduction is where I come in
    Defining the suffering she's endured and broadcasting the yells from deep within
    To write her message is the mandate that I have been given
    If I were a singer I'd sing in a melody so sweet
    And if I were a DJ I'd mix it with every single beat
    If I were a boxer this would be my best fight
    But since i'm a writer I choose to write
    This can be negative but I'll make it a plus
    Though its quick to explode I refuse to bust
    Instead I'll erupt on these words and let them breathe like fire
    For she drives me and this compels me to build my empire





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    kdavidscott1 commented on THE PAIN INNER ME

    05-28-2009

    Express yourself then I loved this one too - I too have such feeling like those you go through. You can go to my page and you'll see for yourself - as you from each poem I put on my shelf. These are from my book that I share with you all - if someone is seeking new talent then tell them to call. My number is listed and my site's listed too - I hope to get signed by a company like you... KD

    JEAGLEFEATHER commented on THE PAIN INNER ME

    12-06-2008

    The way you covered this topic is great. The flow of the poems was a little eratic, but that is "writer's license" to shape the flow as you choose; so it remains a very good poem. Thanks

    Poetry comes nearer to vital truth than history.

    Plato (BC 427-BC 347) Greek philosopher.

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