TOUCH ME
hard is life
not having you
to share deep moments with
your skin calls to me
touch me please
or I die the slow death
slowly the sun darkens
the light of life
we cling with fingers
of hunger
to fill the empty heart.
TOUCH ME
4 Comments
Tags: Frustrations Of Life
Poem Commentary
After going through a real rough timeof not being held hugged or kissed
due to a marriage separation
it was if i was going to die literally.
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ApaqRasgirl commented on TOUCH ME
10-10-2010
- wonderful little write dear, so filled with your emotions running through all the words. thanks for sharing dear......love asha
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10/10/2010
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carynontherhine commented on TOUCH ME
08-10-2010
- I love this write as I once heard that if there is no touch for a baby then he or she will not be able to develop. So I loved the picture. Have you heard that too? In all regards, I love it. Not too long and not too short. A perfect 10!
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08/11/2010
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blueberry commented on TOUCH ME
08-10-2010
- Great poem! I just have to let you know, that I adore that picture you display. It's so adorable.
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bklynrizz commented on TOUCH ME
11-02-2009
- I liked this poem. It is filled with emotion. Very well written.
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11/04/2009
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