Across the midnight sky

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    This was one of the poems that I wrote a few years ago!

    Across the midnight sky

    A gentle soothing breeze

    The wind lets out a settled sigh

    The candles as they please

     

    And all around the salty water

    Foam crawling up the jagged cliff

    Again, the whole world seemed to falter

    Wondering why, or who or if

     

    But yet the gleaming, sad misfortune

    That overlapped the shining sea

    And the sun setting, burning yellow

    The silent sob echoed through the key

     

    And rang around the world a warning cry

    That left all ones to mourn

    The soft currents turned to angry tides

    And the lives were left forlorn

     

    The breezes turned to strong winds

    And every silence turned to sigh

    Across the meadow full of sins

    Was let loose and set to fly

     

    So, to run across the battlefield

    Stained and drowned in tears

    And to sit, to cry and weep

    A prayer loses fears

     

    No screams were echoed later that time

    Not on that dark and lonely night

    All was well, and they saw light

    Across the darkened midnight sky

     

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    When power leads man towards arrogance, poetry reminds him of his limitations. When power narrows the area of man's concern, poetry reminds him of the richness and diversity of existence. When power corrupts, poetry cleanses.

    John F. Kennedy (1917-1963) Thirty-fifth President of the USA

    shadelight’s Poems (25)

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    As Of Today 0
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    Run Away 3
    Lost Memory 1