Colors

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    Try and see where I used symbolism :)

    Colors

     As blue splashes across the canvas
    As it fades from the years
    As it lays there, waiting
    For the next layer to be applied

    As red struts across the paper
    Flaunting assets with a knowing smirk
    As it taps its feet, impatient
    For the next layer to be applied

    As purple flows against the sketchpad
    Graceful, sleek, and lithe
    Dances, oblivious yet knowing not waiting
    For the next layer to be applied

    As black seethes as it is forced
    Shoved onto its place
    As it wants to cry out, but needs to wonder when
    For, the next layer will be applied

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    Poetry is not the expression of personality but an escape from personality.

    T. S. Eliot (1888-1965) American-English poet and playwright.

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