Alone

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Alone

The first time I saw you

I thought we would be together forever.

Things started out great.

The first time we kissed was like magic.

And then my world fell apart,

Because you left me here all by myself.

You left me

Alone and crying.

Then you came back into my life.

I was so happy to have you back again,

That blindly, I once more gave you my love.

Hoping that you could mend what you had broken,

But yet again you crushed my new found happiness,

Crushed what was left of my heart into nothingness.

And once more you left me

Alone and crying.

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bforibus commented on Alone

01-02-2010

up and down. back and forth. emotional satisfying and teasing. sick and twisted characters in this piece. i loved the wanting, but enjoyed the diaseter shortly thereafter. great job

RettaJ commented on Alone

11-25-2009

awwww losing a love is never easy...i hope everything turned out for the better...excellent poem.

KagenoKitsune commented on Alone

09-28-2009

is happening to me right now, i want to share your poem with person, but i know it not help, maybe even make worse. but i do like it very much, thank you for sharing good poem

Rygar commented on Alone

09-04-2009

very moving, it reminds me of....well..me. great job, it was very relatable, and i could feel what you were feeling. thats the mark of a great poet. making someone feel you.

2irishman2 commented on Alone

08-12-2009

Oh jeez that is so sad. You were right you don't have really happy poems... I loved how there was a message in it all and not just emotional dribble. And it was really good too.

Poetry comes nearer to vital truth than history.

Plato (BC 427-BC 347) Greek philosopher.

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Why 9
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You and Me 9
Letting Go 12
Alone 15
The Depression of Youth 18
Promises 6
Good-bye 5
Ending It All 12
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