An Overnight Slant

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    So I've been listening to Vampire Weekend. Nice band, good flow, fine tone. As I slept, many an idea flowed around me. Here in words, a river of consciousness.

    An Overnight Slant

     Despicable

    Detestable

    Desires

    What if

    Just imagine with this lovely

    These words compiled up

    If we were all of the undead

    Vampires

    Zombies

    Some argue werewolves

    Intense battles

    Shedding blood

    Our life letting loose

    Destruction in form

    Wordly girls

    Know of the dead ones

    Handsome men

    In shining form

    I detest

    I need something to

    Sing about

    Help me, anyone?

    Twilight of the insignificant

    Eyes of youth

    Righteous quest

    To the bold known

    The place ventured

    The times before

    Only recorded deep within

    Dreams of the children

    Expelled from musings

    Damned a wanderer

    Just an idea

    Set free

    Just an idea

    That will wonder

    Just an idea

    That will wander

    Just an idea

    That will go on

    Living

    An overture

    The finite galaxies

    A recalled memory

    Crash and burn

    Clash and mourn

    Foreign dignity

    Torn off with the rags

    Rage of flesh

    Blood in tooth

    Mouth on skin

    The sucking of the blood

    Children

    Say goodbye

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